1:17 Makes me jiggle in my chair :3
That was 100% dirty!
I really really really like this! I agree with Yoshi about the layering, however the vocal clip was actually sick, because you built up the tune, me expecting it to drop, then the vocals then a drop for a heavy track.
I would not mind using use in a future youtube video of mine (with your permission ofc) we should talk :)
Bloody hell, this sounds menacing. But moving on...
The drums could use some beefing up. Try layering the kicks and snares with something heavier. Also, hi hats.
That vocal clip at around 1:02 is a bit too long. If it was used in the later parts (more energetic parts...if it had any more), then it would probably fit in fine,
The energetic bit could use more energy. Get a low, gritty/distorted bass in there (or if there's already one, fatten that poor skinny fella!). And sometimes the beat skip doesn't sound nice (before the 4-to-the-floor beat).
Hook this track up with the sloppiest couch potato you know and get this sick filth real fat.
Now these are the reviews I like.
You're right, I didn't layer any of my instruments. Would be a smart plan for future tunes!
As for the vocal clip, it's exactly 4 bars, so I thought it would fit right in, but I'll keep that in mind, next time I'm voicing my own music.
As for beefing it up, that's always a good idea if you ask me. Hahaha. The bass'ier the better. ;)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.