I completely agree with Fubaka. If you can find a way to blend the intro along with the remainder of the song, I think you would have something great going on here. Another thing that I think you could improve is the piano. If you turn it up just slightly and perhaps add a small amount of reverb, it would make the piano much more profound. Besides that, I found this to be really easy to listen to. Great job! :)
Honestly, I think the softer bit collides too harshly with the opening tune. This song would benefit greatly if you found a way to better bridge those two segments. For instance, the melody you have that kicks up later is slightly better intertwined with that specific segment.
Other than that, it's a decent background tune.
this is very ambient. quite good actualy overall. for background. I liked it.
hmm.. sounds like a lot of 3x 0sc. As much as I love that instrument, it would sound a lot better if you tweaked that more. (I'm 80% sure you used that).
once the drone section of the song came in, it felt like the intro was out of place. this song could just be fine without it.
those are just my two cents. good work overall.
Nope, you are wrong sir. I don't particularly care for 3xOsc at all, and it wasn't used in this at all. I used Nexus for most of the sounds.
And, well, I do suppose you're right about that intro not fitting. But then, it is for a development game, so there's always time to improve the various aspects of it, music included.
Thanks for the feedback.