so it's dumb and slightly crazy then with a fail melodic, guess I wouldn't bother disagreeing since you hate your shit so much.
if you did like it though, I'd say hey, the snare needs more of a thump to it, but then after that, it's a cool beat, it would work even better if you sped it up by a good 10 to 15 bpm
I would definitely try and re-EQ' both kick and snare. (and yes, I'm not one to talk, since I tend to never get those right either), yet, the kick and snare sound a bit muffled. Like they are pushed back, by the intensity of your, freaky melody. I kinda' like it though, so nice job.
pretty cool. like the beat
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