I wouldn't really consider this house music lol. and that applies to the original one too. I kind of enjoy the progression but the thing is all of your samples and sounds just all sound so generic and unedited. You should learn to master instruments, so that it can somehow sound less basic. I can't really explain it right now; i don't have the words in my head. Although, i did say i enjoyed the progression, the melody sounds bland as well. It just too easy to follow and sounds just like a lesson from a "how to play piano" book. I understand you're just starting out, but message me if you like towards my email. I can help you out if you like. I'm not that great either, but you know, the music industry is a broken place. I'd at least try to help others of what i positively know.
Thank you for your input :)