Just a couple things :

First - try to use claps at the beginning instead of snares (around 00:05 -00:15) it would be more catchy.
Then - the kicks and the reverse bass lack (especially the reverse bass) lack of power compare to the lead.
Next - layer your lead - with a more distorted melody and a sharped one and play with the cutoff filter trough the song. The sound get more interesting
Also - I think the intro/ break would be better if you try to put 1- A pad + a pluck (playing the lead)
or 2- kick + screetcher.
Finally - what about some nice vocals to give more depth to the song?

Anyway, still it's really good, Im just bitching around..

Amazing,

there was no way I wasn't going to download this song. I honestly love this piece of work and I will be following you from now on! Keep up the incredible music!

Reginald14~ 5/5 5 Stars!