Hey man, you have some really good ideas. I like the variation work at 0:38 and the buildup after that. Although the sounds after that are a bit more on the dance side, it's still nicely done. Production is quite solid too. :)
This was my first ever approach at a piece that had decent length and variation to it. Compared to my latest work "At Dawn," the strings on this I believe could have been mastered alot better and the whole thing itself could sound a lot less muffled. I also know exactly what I could've done in terms of a real classical percussion instead of a mere drumkit :) It really is helpful to listen to some classical works, sometimes it needs that bit of inspiration.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.