I feel like a dork posting this but... You're making a game?
A friend is.
Ok, you hit what you were trying for on the nose- Nice tone use, and it has a bit of inspiration, followed by the shade darker than neutral, for undecided feelings. Its very good, kudos. Kinda hoping this game gets made, especially if the music will be more than decent.
Actually it's a text based game so it won't be used in the original version at least. I have to ask the guy if he wants me to port it to flash though.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.