You asked so I give review.
I don't really care what genre you put this song in even if it may not be house. However, I will say your ping pong fx sound is quite a interesting move on your part. Your trance pad is unfortunately not well done. Messy and poorly mastered.
0:33 so much better with that trance pad gone. Nothing impressive with the bass, but I think we got something going with the lead instrument's composition. It may need some work for instrument sound, but kudos on the patterns used.
0:54 Need a revision of that chordal instrument. Too generic.
1: 51 Really? Just a clap layer added? Where is the climax?
2:05 - end: not much to add as it is looping.
Overall, spend more time on your instruments. What I mean by that is to clean up your instruments (better mixing) and make more unique sounding (less generic instruments). There needs to be some kind of climax in your song. I don't notice one. I will say kudos on the interesting composition and staying in key for most of the song. Best of luck in your future songs. 5/5
thank you for the review im not gonna lie i didn't spend a crazy amount of time on this song like i should have. But I liked it enough to post and I really am thankful for the review.
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