Not sure how your song took a score beating so fast, but I will 5/5 so that others can see your song and perhaps give you more comments.
As a WIP, I suggest you take away the crowd fx. Any song that needs a artificial crowd just to fill a song is a problem.
Secondly, your not going to get far with using generic techno syncs and bass pattern. I think you should have submitted your WIP when it was more complete because I can't really say much for a song that plays the same note over and over again.
As a final word of advice, try to be different to stand out. NG is a great place to improve your skills. If you want to impress the kids and young teens, keep doing what your doing, but if you want to get the older teens and adults (I might add they also have the money if you decide to become a paid producer and DJ) you need to play around with your music program a bit more. GL with your future songs.
Thanks for the advice. This is more of just a mixing test and your right about the genric techno synths. I am getting boerd of that my self. Im trying to find a new style, I went from Basshunter style to, Acid. Happy hardcore, and im just trying to find somthing im happy in. And my yotube channel has tons more videos and lots of them are 3 min songs. Thanks for the advice :D
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