It was okay. The drums wrecked the whole song. You could have used a different beat. Besides that, I like the main melodies, and the bass.
What would you suggest, in the way of beat?
I just went with a slightly Final Fantasy X-2 feel on this one, like what you occasionally get in battles and Spherechanges.
Ok,ok you were not lying, i hereby grant you a permit for using Slayer ;)
Though, my favourite part is from 0:37 to 1min, very nice drums.
Those drums were FPC! *blush* Still, glad you liked them!
Oh, very nice stuff :D You got me right at the intro. And the atmosphere is wonderful. The looping is not bad, and oh, at 0:13 was just great. It felt too quiet and somewhat empty exactly two seconds later, though, even for the tiny build up you created. A letdown, but a tiny one, at that.
This tracks seems to emit a very Linkin Park vibe, for reasons I can't explain, because I don't know them yet ^__^' Perhaps stuff from their Reanimation album, which I love to pieces. Something about the chords and ambiance, maybe.
So you've got this awesome rhythm and it works very well. Nice melodies, too; I like that you reintroduce the theme toward the end - it never really goes away. I can't really get over how much I like this. So just, good job in general! Interesting description, by the way. :) There's nothing better than having something to read or look at while listening to a piece of music, letting the story play out beside your ears.
I like the beginning synths, though the one intruduced at 13 sec feels a bit grating at some moments. Otherwise, the melodies are fine and I didn't think it was repetitive.
Thats really epic!!! Keep doin it bro! I mean, sis))
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.