This is good, but it could get better. I know you have put a lot of time into the melodies. And to be honest they are great. But somehow it gets kind of dragged out. it's just that it takes so long for the track to actually start. At 02.55 it sounds awesome! maybe not in class with other dnb producers, but you will get there some day! :)
Overall. Great track, i love the piano and the sub bass. It makes it relaxing.
Another thing though, the drums. They sound cool and all, but if you want real dnb feeling to it i would suggest that you look up some sample packs and start cutting from them and such. Just to get that "real" dnb feeling :)
Quite decent actually.
I would love to see more work from you :)
i think the song well be great but add some rock or something else but sitll very good
now comes the longer part of adding sounds to keep flow going, stutters, changing up the beat. it'll take some time :D but the end result will hopefully be worth it. Rock, idk, this particular track i am looking more at chill laid back, drawn out ambiant with a bit of an edge and flow. (if that makes any sense).
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.