I liked the chilld aspects of this song, but it was really good when it picked up a bit!
The intro was iffy, but the part after that was actually really pleasant, but the third part was very simple and just didn't even seem quantized, the transition out of that was really nice, and then the following part was overall pretty nice. I would refrain from using those vocal samples though, they're clearly not yours, they're all different voices, and I expected them to turn into vocals. Lastly, the song ended out of no where, and its was getting more interesting too. I would expand the ending and just run over it again, but it has really nice sections
Thanks, I made this as a fun pump up song, although I agree if I spent the time to expand it and make it a full electro song it could be very nice. I felt like the drop was too different than the intro, and the vocal samples were kind of a last minute thing for fun. Maybe at the end of this version i'll bring the master cutoff down and bring in a new melody and build back up for something.
What music program did you use?
Logic Pro 9 made by Apple :)