I thought this piece was well done, considering its a rough version. The only two things that I found fault in were the the vocals and the genre label. The vocals are fine in terms of the musicality of it, but I couldn't understand very much of it. Also, nothing in this piece really screams "heavy metal" to me, sounds a lot more like standard rock/punk. But, since it is a rough version, perhaps you were already planning on cleaning up the vocals anyway. Good job!
Ahh thanks man yeah I was being a bit lazy with the whole genre thing its meant to be a kid of punkier song not metal hahaha! I need to redo pretty much everything on the track especially the vocals they are abit too rough! Thank you though dude is very nice of you! :)
The drum machine sounds weird a bit. But it's okay after all.
yeah im not good at programming beats I have a teaspoon knowledge of the world of drums! Thanks for the compliment though :)
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