I have to agree with the guy below, but I think you should also back off on the drums a bit. A heavy base beat doesn't really work well with this kind of piece. I'd recommend focusing more on symbols and maybe light snare drums. At least during the improvish parts.
Good point! THx for the review!
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Here some hopefully helpful advice:
The biggest flaw is in my opinion the mixing / mastering. The song sounds a bit dull / muffled overall and it lacks some loudness. Good studio headphones / speakers help a lot, but imho it is even more helpful to simply compare the song to some other artist's stuff you like. I made a lot of tracks which sounded good to me, especially after workin on them for hours and listening to nothing else during that time. When compared to other tracks, though, I suddenly noticed they lacked a lot of heights or the bass sounded very muddy. So if you don't already do this when mixing & mastering your tracks, give it a try! Although I am not a huge fan of too much compression: To give this song some more power, you should add some. Or even a lot, it's a dance song after all. ;D
Keep up the good work!
hey thanks dude I know exactly what you mean I'll give it a try!
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