Thoroughly enjoyed this track for two reasons.
1. You compose without regard as to what people want - and it shows in a very positive way.
2. Your mixes are nice and balanced, it's easy listening. Loved the variation you had throughout the piece - despite it, it never felt rushed between major transitions.
You have a lot of talent to be sure. I'd have to disagree with the rating on this song - something like 4.5 would be more accurate. I think some people might have had trouble with the fact that some pitches didn't quite match in the melody, but I think that it adds a lot to the flavor of the track.
I loved the low bass pluck instrument that sounds like hitting pipes (not sure what it is). The pulsing low bass sometimes made the kick drum a bit mushed down in the mix especially when the pipe bass came in simultaneously with it, but nothing that really needs to be fixed.
Overall, this is a very nicely done track. I enjoyed it greatly - and even though it looks like you're taking a break from NG, I hope you come back with amazing tracks like this. Favorited 5/5