Uh yeah that’s it

Okay little piece. Reminds me a bit of the guys that first introduced me to Jazz, The Gerry Beaudoin Trio. The whole piece feels like you missed a lot of potential in my opinion. You could have expanded your lead a bit. The whole thing sounds rather....hard-edged? I don't know how to put it, but to put it as bluntly as possible, you put too much emphasis on the lead. Work on it a little more, and you can get things like this to good places.

Sincerely,
thedethbot