I really like the melody of this song. But the break=-in at 1:12 was just a little weak... It seemed like maybe it got compressed a little to much and took a lot of volume away. And I think you'd have more of an energized break-in if you had a snare in there at the beginning. I'm loving those base drops... And the pads! What are you using for the bass drops? I'd love to incorporate that sound into my heavy metal drops.
This was a pleasure to listen to... Great job and keep it up!