The vocals and lyrics need a bit of tweaking, but other than that its really catchy and I enjoy it.
Nice to hear a new song from you! I really like your voice and singing style even if this recording is just a rough sketch. The mix is pretty sloppy and sounds far too crowded. I can't hear all the lyrics and it'd be nice if you included them in the author comments. I think the drums add a nice urgency to the song and compliment your singing style. All in all a messy but fun listen!
Thanks for the input bud. This was kind of in the never show anyone vault, but I started listening to it again and felt that even though it is quite shitty there are a lot of good things going on within the song. This was the last song I tried recording before I left for basic training, so it was never completed. Maybe someday I will refine it, but I thought some of the people that do enjoy my music would liked to hear this version.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.