Great track. I love the melody. I also love what you did with the hi-hats at the beginning of the song and throughout the beat. The thing that really felt missing in this track was a proper break-in. Trance usually has a "rise", and then a "breakdown" and then another "rise" and onto the main chorus. Where the beat is fast and uplifting. But I totally understand what you're doing here. It's a little short, but it was great. Keep it up!
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