I'm very unfamiliar with Drama / Spoken word voice acting and not quite sure what it's about, if this is some kind of art or an example of voice acting in general.
I'll give you my impression anyway;
Your voice isn't bad, but it becomes a bit monotonous after a while.
It need a bit more... drama, 'yknow. It needs like bigger tone changes, a bit more audible commitment to what you're talking about..
Well i'm not sure what the rest of the genre is like but this is definitely closer to art for me than it is an example of voice acting. I'm not really a voice actor and I only read my stuff for lack of anybody else (or anybody else as reliable, close-at-hand, etc.) I'm more concerned with the content/concept than I am the voice acting. However, I'm always glad to get advice! Thanks for the reviPr
Very well produced and thought provoking. Voice acting was good as well, not perfect, a few more drinks would have helped, but mostly good.
Heh heh, thanks!