first off, I don't know if the guy below me will ever read this, but what the hell are you listening to a song with the description "A MELLOW GUITAR SONG" and then expect it to be metal.
Anyways, some real criticism.
The guitar melody was awesome, simple, soft, sweet, short, and subdued (alot of S...)
I would have said add more instruments to it, but by itself this song is pretty awesome to. Have you considered reverb? I know I heard some in there, but I felt a heavier dose, with a slight echo would have made it more... peaceful?
Anyways, I really liked it, 5 bomb for you! Keep them coming, you've really got some talent behind you.
To tell you the truth, I actually wrote the melody when my high e-string was broken. Was oddly inspiring experiment.
It was one of the first songs I did in Guitar Pro, and I really was never satisfied with the sound I got, either. I considered making another version (different guitar? different program?), but I'm hoping someday I'll be able to actually play and record it on my own classical guitar. Don't have the talent, now, alas.
Arigatou gozaimasu! *bows*
not good enough. put a more effort in it and make more different sounds. and if u want me 2 be interested in it make it more rock take something like the MK theme 4 example or something that would show ur a party animal.