I give a close rating to this. Nice job
So the drums were alright. The bass is really deep. I'm liking that. Would like a little more presence from it, though. The lead with the portameno on it could have its volume lowered somewhat, or you could accompany it with a plucked instrument of some sort. Better yet, maybe put some LFO on it that comes in every now and then. Automations, you know. I wouldn't start with just the straight drums, though. They aren't strong enough, yet. You might also want a different kind of hi-hat. Don't take it out when the pattern changes around 0:32. Keep it in so that the flow keeps going. Loving the aura in the chorus. Nice. Keep it up!
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