That's a pretty eery song haha Huge props on having great vocals...well damn I don't have much to say about this one, it's really well made and original! A perfect submission in my eyes!
Congrats on winning the second place in contest and very happy Christmas to you and your family. Your place in the contest itself tells you about the standard of the song :)
Is it supposed to be evil?
I didn't notice any lines that were too long because the performance was spot on. I loved this.
lol macabre christmas.. why does this feel like tim burton's willy wonka hahaha...
some of the lyrics felt a bit.. crammed in there hahaha.. but like most of your submissions it feel very well thought out and very well constructed :)
also some vocal advice.. if you're gonna make a big gasp like you did before the second last chorus you should pull away from the mic when you do it otherwise the professionality feels a bit.. diminished.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.