I think its worth a listen
Its certainly somthing way to just jump in with the synths and wut not. My older stuff sounded kinda similiar keep at it doode i know you worked hard on it this distortion kinda bugged me most people like that sorta thing though. Peace Syntrus out (0_0)
I mostly agree with Zenon. I think this would really benefit from a more silent introduction. Then just let it expand like it does now, have an even more silent interlude, and then expand even more, and end abruptly. Of course, this is just my suggestion.
I really like the idea and the composition, it's simple but very vivid. Good job so far! Let me know when you finish it.
Well, this gets right to the melody...
It kind of jump starts into the song with the melody, but In the beginning, I'd like to hear more 'percussion percs'. Bongos, triangles, tribal stuff. Japanese stuff kind of revolves more of a catchy melody with percussion. Keep those sliding strings for the end.
Try to stray away from using hi hats and that kind of snare. Try using a more of a jungle snare, like one used in drum n bass or something. Clavs are also a very powerful instrument when you don't... over use them. Try adding some.
Try to revolve around lots of tinny instruments. the little arp you have going on is great, keep that. Like I said before, keep that sliding stirng later, for the end, or just eliminate it entirely.
The kick is good, I'd keep that.
So, in summary: Watch for muddling. Don't let things muddle. Stray away from using FL samples on this one, the drums need to sound real-ish. Since its trance, the kick can stay though.
aaaannnnddd.... I thinik thats about it. Good luck with this one.