it was a nice buildup at 1:01, but the tempo all the sudden went fast and the song kinda went down afterwards.... i think you should slow down a it on the drums and the sounds kinda i guess clash to each other....
however, you did good with the sounds in 2:13, with the main music, but the problem with it is that it had all these other sounds coming in to override this main theme... and made the music a bit downgraded on what it should be....
I think your review is complete bullshit.
Those points which you found 'good' are the worst parts of the song IMO, and those 'flaws' are intended - it's supposed to be there.
This isn't fast at all (190 BPM). Do you even know the default speed for D&B, which is 180 BPM? The beats here aren't too fast. There are songs over 200 BPM, 220 BPM, etc. and they still sound good.
The main theme was supposed to be drowned by new melodies as time progressed. Otherwise, repetition will dominate and make the song boring.
I worked one fucking month on this. If you're planning to be a fucktard with little to no constructive criticism, then GTFO and refrain from reviewing. You don't qualify as an audio reviewer, especially on D&B terms. Learn to appreciate music that's out of your comfort zone, and if you can't do that, then don't listen to it.
Your review is completely opinion-based; you view it your way, but others view it their way, and no-one's view is universal.
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