Star69 was too much filler, Masochist was more aggressive and had better lines overall.
Star69 -1 Masochist -5
this comment is just a co-sign of butsaay & teq-neek. They pretty much covered everything I was thinking. I enjoyed listening to this though. vurry lulzy. Props to Star for just comin in and takin on like 20 battles, so it's understandable that he isn't going to research everybody to get 32 bars of disses on everybody. Also, jack, you should have just dissed sjd without being like "love yaa"
+1 cool points for each mc
Decent flow from both of you. Could use some work on your lines though. A lot of lines and very few personals. Masochist had the most though so I gotta give it to him. Welcome to HDC gents. Let the growth begin.
Star69 -1 Masochist -4
Im giving this one to Masochist.. Great flips! The line about mother liking men not boys. haha.. Either way, both were great! 5d and Keep up!
Star69 -1 Masochist -3
Damn Butsaay, you covered everything I was gonna say in your review.
Okay, basically, this was Star69's first battle, and I think he did a damn fine job- ESPECIALLY not knowing what the general rules of thumb for Newgrounds battling are. He joined HDC and NG yesterday, and completed his first battle within hours of joining. Dude has impressive delivery, lyrics and voice, and I think he has a bright future up here. Once he gets to know the people in HDC and Newgrounds, he'll be bringing the personals I'm sure.
Masochist is improving by the day. He came with more personals and had some good punches, plus his flow is on point. However, like Butsaay said, he's gotta work on that voice. It is still monotonous and not very exciting. Once he gets the emotion in there he will be a force to be reckoned with. Also, those last bars should have been redone. Masochist was running out of breath and it really hurt him there.
I like both of you guys, and I consider Masochist a friend nowadays, but I gotta give this to Star69. He has better delivery and seems to have found his rap voice. The lack of personals took some points off for me, but he still brought enough to the table to win this in my opinion. This battle was close as fuck. Good job to both of you.
Star69 -1 Masochist -2
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