I don't think it's corny at all! I don't know about making music, but I listen and use a lot of it. My only suggestion is a longer note at the very end. I've faved this to come back to for future projects. :))
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'd love to hear about it if you ever end up using it. :)
Also, I didn't even notice the note at the end was cut off. Thanks for letting me know about that. This was a bit of a rough draft so I didn't pay a lot of attention when I bounced it. I'll get that fixed soon.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.