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Dec 8, 2012 | 9:09 AM EST
File Info
5.5 MB
3 min 25 sec
4.00 / 5.00

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Rated 4.00 / 5 stars
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570 Plays | 26 Downloads
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Electronic - Dance

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Hopefully you will like it. :)



Rated 4 / 5 stars

The tune sounds a bit generic at the start for me. Then it slows moves away and goes towards its own rhythm and flow.

The squeaky sound I hear near the start before the transition was really nice to listen to. The synth makes me think of relaxing on an afternoon with nothing to worry about except when it becomes night time.

The drums are good. Really enjoy the pounding bass kicks. Then start up sound was great then a synth being played alone before the drums and second synth come back into the song. The low sounding synth that sounds like a toy is a nice background sound.

Overall, great song.

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Rated 4 / 5 stars

Great song, pleasure to listen to.


The "ahhhhhh" vocals' reverb could have some stereo effects to it so that it dissappears into the rest of the song more seamlessly.

The crash's high frequencies seem a bit too high. When it's played with other instruments, it seems to clash. I'd even say it's a bit overpowering. It SHOULD stand out but it needs blend in a bit more so I suggest turning down some of the higher frequencies on it.

The high hats sound a bit low in quality, as if they've been processed at a really low bit rate. Maybe you should use some different ones or synthesize your own.

There really isn't anything special about this song. It's all very generic sounding and plain. It needs a special spark that sets it apart from the rest. A reason to exist. What other aspects of exhaling can you incorporate into this song to make it more special? Maybe something about inhaling. Maybe record someone inhaling and use it before you start the song. You could even incorporate some lyrics.

Your song lacks sub bass. Your kick is punchy but, there's nothing else in the low end that complements it. It kinda makes this song feel empty. In contrast, there are a ton of thing in the high frequency spectrum of the song which makes the song unbalanced.

Also because your song is about exhaling, it needs more build ups and drops. Automate the volume of your instruments and add some more instruments at ONLY the buildups and make them epic.

Actually I feel like you should learn more about reverberation and how you can incorporate it into your songs to full effects.

Make sure you don't have frequencies clashing with eachother. Try to EQ when necessary.

You claps and reverse claps lack reverb. You could use a reverb with a really short gate on it to add presence.

-Good Stuff-

Concept of the song (exhaling - releasing)

Instrumentation was nice. You had a wide variety of instruments in this song.


Good effort and good luck in the future! :)


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice drums and synths!