i think, this song is so cool, congratulations bro :)
Oh no... please, dont tell me you are a bronie... ok now about the song, at 0:04 i found the resonance too high, around 2:00 and 3:20 there is a lead which does not go with the beat. It's out of the beat. The other thing I noticed is that the bass is not on the right key, it's off-key. The filter you put at 1:43 isn't good mastered, imo. The crashes, like the one at 1:11 is toooo loud for the song. This could be mastered and EQ'd better. Also this is more videogame music, not even close to trance. I think you have to try more out and to practice, also watch some tutorials on youtube, maybe?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.