00:00
00:00

Thank you TenodiBoris for supporting NG!

We're 15 people from our target today. Why don't you be one of them?

You can support NG too and get tons of perks for just $2.99.

Create a Free Account and then..

Become a Supporter!

Ozai

Share Download this song

Author Comments

I have made som changes. I think this is better... Any feedback?

Reviews


nice riffs dude 1)i suggest you to change the 0:02-0:05 scream....i don't think it fits the song..
2)the 1st guitar does the same solo on 2 different series of notes i suggest you
(for example) to change it's tonality not so fast....to let the listener hear this tone
lowering-increasing
3)the 2nd guitar(i think i heard it in the background sometimes :P)
does the job pretty well!
------>Score&final thoughts<------
it's a good song.....but needs some more sharpening
4stars,it's a good song,but i know you can do it even better!
4 score,just to nvite other dudes for giving useful feedbacks....and because you did a good job,better than many of the daily submissions!


People find this review helpful!
Arkaft responds:

1) Noted ;)
2) you mean the part 00:18 - 00:30?
3) There is actually 3 guitars. One L one R and the last one C. And my problem is that i do not have studio-monitors, only 35$ speakers :P So it's a little hard to do professional mixing with this shit :P But I'll see what i can do when i'm coming home for christmas :P I bought a AKG headset in Israel a few months back.... It's good for listening, but not recording... What I was trying to say, is that with my lame speakers it sounds ok and most likely does it sound shit on anything else :P

Cheers for the comment bro! Appreciate it! I will try to get my hands on a pair of monitors soon, so i don't have any excuses :P And i will try to fix what you said ;)

Click on an icon to vote on this!

Credits & Info

Arkaft
Author

Listens
815
Downloads
48
Votes
10
Score
4.59 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 7, 2012
9:41 PM EST
Genre
Heavy Metal
File Info
Song
3.5 MB
2 min 35 sec
Tags

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.