1:05, 1:15 Bass clipped on the right side.
I'm not really feeling the piano though. Maybe you could make some changes so that the keys are pressed a bit softer?
I feel like some of the instruments are much louder than they need to be (flute, piano).
No real climax.
I'm not too sure if this would be a good opener to your first album though.
-Now for the good stuff-
Although, it is pretty loud at parts I'm really digging the flute though. It's feels a bit "loungy."
I like how you changed the saw too a E-guitar(?) around 1:43 for a teeny bit. I think you do that with the flute too around the one minute mark. I'll have to incorporate that into my own songs :)
lol this song portrays a delusional person very well. As if he/she's strolling through a park thinking he/she's awesome.
All in all, good song. Fun song. Deserves a good rating.