Next time, try for an instrumental. I swear half my brain cells just got cancer from listening to you talk.
But that was beside the point. Like I said if you posted an instrumental. I would have dug this track. So take some rap lessons, and maybe next time it'll be cooler.
Btw if you do re-rap the bars you just spit and it happens to sound a lot better. I'll definitely check it out.
Another note, for some reason I can hear this track(without the rap) being played as the next GTA theme song.