0:00 Wow I like the 2-step drums. They're so fantastic.
0:15 Some off-time synths there. That drum. It's actually fantastic.
0:27 Except your synth here is too obvious. You could work on it a bit.

Very nice short snippet. The main saw/buzz synth is too obvious, you need a more interesting synth than that imo. But reminds me of the epic future garage sounds of Burial, Scuba and the like. Go the moody direction. You're onto something here.