Over all it was well structured and catchy. One large down side is just the synth choice. Try downloading some vsts like native instruments "Massive" or "slyenth1" Those have a decent library of presets when your starting to learn them.

This sounds pretty funny ;) But also good. i would try to put in some more melo's and instruments and also try to use a better kick and snare/clap but the melody and the instrument that u use for it is really cool :D

Keep it Going!

~Forever Bound~

ps: plzz checkout my songs ;)

This is good so far the chorus is great nice job I wanna see the finished product.