this very cool

You have commented on a few of my songs and thankyou for that. This is a pretty sick song.. you give me pretty good advice do you think we could skype or somthing help me out a little? if so just hmu on ng

0:00 Orchestral strings and a steady building gat synth amp this.
0:23 Automations provide interest, build-up is steady.
0:33 I wasn't expecting a I chord there. Strange yet satisfying, if only a bit repetitive.
0:53 Incoming melody please.
1:04 What is this? A refrain? Very soothing, but a bit sudden.
1:18 Dem building gat synths.
1:30 Well it is building up.
1:42 Same build-up, different feel. A recapitulation of sorts.
1:54 This time it feels less forced. More expected. Nice background listening music.
2:25 Then again I can just imagine Flo Rida on this. You should try putting a Flo Rida acapella on it just for fun.

Steady, lilting techno-pop. Danceable, if not exciting. A bit mellow, and I usually like things on the mellow side, but this was almost too mellow. But it was well-mixed, well-produced, and it had a predictable structure as well as rise-fall mechanics. Chords may be a tad repetitive, since you're just switching between the I and IV chords I think. But nevertheless, nice release.

Gotta agree with Johnfn somewhere below me, the structural repetitiveness can ruin a good song by making it boring because we are listening to roughly the same thing for most of the song. It sounds good on first listen but I can't imagine listening to this many times. Maybe you should try my additive form challenge for your next song, like i said it's just for fun, it does become a learning experience as you get to try so many different ways to keep a song interesting.

Cool! This reminds me of Someday by Relika! You should check it out and keep this up. Btw, the really like the abrupt drop and slow build up. It's quite the surprise and I love those sort of things. :)