Good start!

Come on! It's got a good start, time to get crackin' on the rest! :D

....umm

Sorry, it's really good, but im not going to raise by 5 vote on a 30 second song :(... 4 vote =D...
Anyways man, seriously, you should go back to all your 30 second songs, like this, and eurogate, and use them in a full 2-4 minute song.

Keep at er

Yo this ain't bad you should make this into a big song with a trance or dance breat dude best wishes peace Syntrus out (0_0) Ps hit me back