Cool song, but as the previous review says, it's is almost completely mono and suffers from some strange glitches (clicks etc? Could be due to the compressor or bad cuts from editing harshly).
- Record all rhythm guitar parts twice and put one on the left and one on the right
- Boost the kick drum at 60 to 100hz, cut the bass from 100hz and lower but boost it from 100hz to 300hz. This will give the kick drum space to come through and won't sound wimpy.
- Fix timing by editing recordings. Cut, time stretch and use fade-outs properly.