Hey, thank you for leaving a review on my piece!
I like the mood that this evokes. It's chill and yet pushes forward. A few thoughts:
-Structure. This piece is pretty much the same all the way throughout and is not nearly as interesting as it could be. Adding a little contrast in the middle or creating more development would make this a more colorful piece.
-Mixing. It seems to me like some elements are bathed in too much reverb, making everything sound distant. Reverb is great to use, but try having at least one element such as the melody in the foreground with less reverb than everything else. It will help add depth to the piece. Also, I think some instruments could be brought up in volume. There is a low reverberated piano sounding instrument in particular.
-The percussion. I'd recommend adding a snare in there for just a little more punch. Maybe try changing the hi-hat pattern during certain sections (maybe to eighth notes). Play around with syncopation a little more. Try using cymbal rolls for transitions. Venture outside of the standard kick drum only on 1 and 3 pattern.
This piece is a good start but could be much more interesting with a little tweaking. Keep it up!
Hmm, yeah the beat is pretty stellar :S, my bad. Thanks for oyur advice I'll look into all of them for my next composition :D!
I've heard you do better. :)