I really don't think this track should be number 2 on the chart.
First thing is your mix. The drums are not punchy enough, while I can hear the kick and snare (barely), they are lacking in volume and character. If there is a hihat I cannot hear it.
Synths are too loud and your FX are even louder. The bottom end is way too muddy and I can't hear any bass or bassline. And for gods sake turn down that beep sound.
I liked some of the later synth sounds but they lack consistancy in tone with the other instruments like the drums. The beginning synth was just too irritating to listen to with such harsh distortion and tones.
Rhythmn is a little too simple and does not make me want to get up and dance. If is an atmosphere piece then you are on the right track.
Musically the tunes are very drony and repeatitive, and don't have any real hook.
I'm sorry for my harsh critism. I believe you have a lot room for improvement, and you have a lot of potential. Have a listen to some electronic music to see how they have mixed there music, I think it will help you.