the fill from the second chorus guitar part to the distortion is good, use something like that on the first one also cuz w/o a drum fill or smthing like that, it sounds too drastic for non-musicians. what brand's your dist. and chorus, btw?
my distortion and chorus all come from my line 6 spyder.
This song was pretty cool, the beggining was kinds dull but more into the song that distortioned electric rocked. Keep up the good work.