I like the beginning, but I agree the "ay synth" should go. The build with white noise completely destroys the synth when it comes in. The drums are a little weak and lost at times. The beginning is very nice though. I'd love to hear a version focused around that idea. Good Listen. :)
Idk I like the Ay bass, makes it a lot more original... Actually reminds me a lot of my stuff haha, nicely done... Always like finding the 1 in 100 good songs listed as dub step in the audio portal
The only parts listening to are from 1:10 to 135.
Get rid of the weird ass Ay Ay Ay Ay shit in the beginning and it might be decent.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.