This song is very good, but i thought after 0:55 it got a liltte weak, I'm no musician, but I do write some stuff, and I usually re-read every chapter I wrote the day before, so I can see how it sounds like when I'm not burning with the fire of will of when you're doing it. I suggest you to wait for the isnpiration to hit your brain like the awesome midnight newyear fireworks. After 0:55 I also think the voice was too loud and some need some bigger drop.
Keep it comming it is great already!