Nice! The choice of sounds go perfectly together and I absolutely dig how you loop the song. One of my favourite entries in the mac 12, that's for sure.
I almost entirely agree with Metal Renard. There's about 15 seconds of thematic material (very good material) but there's not really any expansion or development. It could indeed use a proper melody and more harmony and maybe a few different chords in there? It seems to be based on the whole '4 chord' idea all the way through which made it a bit dull. Having said that it's a great loop and the balance as pretty perfect. Good job champ.
yeeee, That's one piece of Musical ART
you got me right in the beginning!!!
but seriously, how the f... do you create these melodies, i LOVE them
When I heard the intro I was really impressed, what an awesome way to begin a song! Sadly I feel the rest of the song lacks the same interest as the intro and just repeats the beginning rather than going further. I feel it needs a melody over the top from around the 0:15 second mark to really finish it off. It's cool as background music but as something one would listen to it needs something more to really stand out.
Like you said, it's a good mix too, good job on that.
You are free to copy, distribute and transmit this work under the following conditions:
*Please contact me if you would like to use this in a commercial project. We can discuss the details.