You shouldn't need to prove that you're worth something to your friends with victories. :c
But it was really cool. I liked how the sounds sounded hand-made. Some of the melodies felt too internal. Like.. It's hard to explain. There's no science or study-able method to it, just try to imagine the melody in your head before you make it. Or humm a melody while listening to what you already have.
Anyways, decent song. Needs mastering. And by that I mean a really thick compressor over the Master Channel. Preferably a multi-band one. Raise the highs and lows a bit and push the threshold way down. I think you'll notice significant improvement, and also it adds a powerful, professionalish sheen that will quickly uhm.. impress your friends.
Anyways, Thanks for uploading. I'd appreciate if you'd listen/comment on my music as well. :3
I was (mostly) joking about the friend thing :P But uh, I kinda wanted it to resemble Rezonate's Pump It! having a kind of punch then a tiny solos after each one. Umm and for the multi-band compression, could you translate that into Garageband speak? Haha, I don't entirely know what I'm doing yet, I just try to make something that sounds good to me. Thank you for the feedback though, I'm off to your page!