quality could be better but over all i like the direction it went i guess!
Another good sound i have come across here on the Audio portal, and its always a pleasure to have some new and nifty sounds such as this one you have presented here. This had a very dark touch to it, i believe that was your intent, but you had some nice sounds and a nice mixture of sounds aswell, it was not too long nore was it too short either, but you generally have a decent piece here and i like what you have here, so nice job indeed, keep upthe decent sound work. As all things come to an end so does this review, but not before i have to say that it was a pleasure, to hear your sound workon this one, so notbad with this one.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Here are some ideas that may work or may not work but you should try and work with some or if just one of the ideas, and if not then you are good to go, but anyways here is a possible idea. Maybe have some sort of bells and chimes in the backround might give for a dark feel aswell.