this is a pretty solid track nice work, if i were you i would drop some beat on the intro (A Slowly fading in kick maybe) make it less repetitive, make the intro last shorter, and add way more automations!! also when you throw the kick in at 1:00, i would probably throw in some hi hats (that come in slowly..in other words fading) after that i would insert some claps maybe and play with them ....
well these are my suggestions just try to not make it boring even if you don't follow any of the things i told you, you have to control your song, not the song you! it's up to you :D
I view this as a mix of tech and trance, because it progresses in less dynamic ways than a normal techno song. It's like, what is the purpose of the song, to be loud or soft? It's trying to decide now, and you have to help it decide whether it's gonna be a techno song or a trance song. Also, the sine wave at 3:24 is too loud! That wave needs to be more complex or softer cuz right now it's just straight and annoying
Wow, I went back and listened to the first songs, and the way the melodies mesh together is actually pretty phenomenal. I like the hard hitting kick, and the synths are solid. Can't wait to hear it when it i finished. All I can provide critically, structurally of course, is that I feel like it needs a climax moment... Like, where the synths all come together, and throw in a little more drum play, some snare or clap, and some hi-hats. Good job so far!
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