I saw "Dark Industrial Hardcore" and got excited, but I agree with Yon Grinder: Basic at best. The kick wasn't bad though.
To be honest, the only thing that stands out is the music box at the end. The thunder storm was a nice touch as well. Other than that it sounds a bit basic to me. I have to admit its well crafted though. Decent job.
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