Its pretty good, and you have potential, in fact, nothing was wrong with it, but one thing, you should look for some drum samples, or use a plug in to create your own because I can smell Fruity Loops starter drums a mile away. Otherwise, good work!
I like how the starter drums sound :(
This is a pretty chill piece, it's got some style in it that I dig, man. Keep on working on your stuff, and you'll get a good style movin'. Awesome track, all I can say is that there is one particular note that doesn't feel like it should be there... I feel like it is maybe flat a little, but I dunno'. Otherwise, dig it, and lovin' the drum kit used.
Thanks for the review man and for the wild note notice!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.