some diversity would be better
okay first problem: The beat goes nowhere you might wanna add snares and hi-hats
Second Problem: The synth is too loud and it sounds an awful lot like Ray Charles' "hit The road jack"
third problem: A lot of this is really off key, im getting the feeling that you just really put random things into the piano roll, a melody would be real nice
With some practice you can advance your skills with fruity loops.
1st Problem: Thx For The Tip I Will Try That
2nd Problem: My Bad I Thought I Lowered The Volume Enough And I Never Heard That Song Before To My Surprise
3rd Problem: I Kinda Wanted It To Sound Like That But It Could Use Fixing
But Thx For The Positive Response