This track is rather confusing, there's not real direction to it, it's just a lot of weird atonal noise thrown in with a heavy sub-bass (that hurts like a sonofabitch in my headphones -_- ).
I'm not going to put 0 because you said you worked for a while on it, so I'm guessing I missed the point of the track and should not blame you for that. All the same, I'd appreciate if you did reply to this review with more information about your intentions for this "music".
Sorry if that sounds a bit harsh. I try to be fair in all my reviews.
Thanks for the feedback!
The real point of this track is schizophrenia. The sub bass is turned up pretty loud, I'll agree. There's no real direction to the song. Someone asked me to create a straight up schizophrenic and bass-loaded song for a party, so I tried my best. Ive gotten alot of compliments on it and there are obviously those that don't like it as its so different and not based on any sort of hook or melody. It's all just supposed to be crazy and weird.
Interesting n weird i like :P
The atmosphere pad introduced in the beginning almost hurts sometimes and is possibly a little distorted. Tone down its high frequency maybe? Sick alien-like effects. The switch at 1.44 really needs to have a proper transition, slow reverse cymbal or a fill effect maybe?
I'm typically more a fan of melody-based songs, but I acknowledge this piece is focussed on effects. It's sorta cool!
Thanks very much for the feedback!